First, don't forget my comments from a few weeks ago - most of this still stands and needs addressing (i know you've been working hard on your video recently):
James
Blog is looking like a C grade overall currently. This needs to be improved as it's below your overall AS grade.
1. Fix the order of posts so that it runs more logically (see checklist or past blogs if unsure) 2. Final storyboard drafts (with explanations?) - where are they? 3. Don't just copy & paste (e.g. UK tribes) - say what the information is giving you and how you'll use that to shape your ideas/video 4. Presentation of some posts is fairly basic (job roles/mise-en-scene, etc.). Make it multi media with lots of supporting images 5. Finish each post - some are incomplete or just too vague to mark highly (TA member profile for example) 6. Student video analysis??
Remember this is 50% of your year. If the filming is going slow (a problem in itself) then at least the blog should be perfect. Next couple of months are massive now.
First, don't forget my comments from a few weeks ago - most of this still stands and needs addressing (i know you've been working hard on your video recently):
ReplyDeleteJames
Blog is looking like a C grade overall currently. This needs to be improved as it's below your overall AS grade.
1. Fix the order of posts so that it runs more logically (see checklist or past blogs if unsure)
2. Final storyboard drafts (with explanations?) - where are they?
3. Don't just copy & paste (e.g. UK tribes) - say what the information is giving you and how you'll use that to shape your ideas/video
4. Presentation of some posts is fairly basic (job roles/mise-en-scene, etc.). Make it multi media with lots of supporting images
5. Finish each post - some are incomplete or just too vague to mark highly (TA member profile for example)
6. Student video analysis??
Remember this is 50% of your year. If the filming is going slow (a problem in itself) then at least the blog should be perfect. Next couple of months are massive now.
C/C-
Now - add text to filming update post/s.
ReplyDeleteThese need doing and should have been completed last week:
Analysis of several from your genre/generic conventions
3 drafts – plus feedback
Final choice
This post is an A - good detail and examples, plus plenty of *nsync.